Monday, December 8, 2014

Some more info from the Harrisons. Enjoy!


I also adore the vocabulary word of the day from tomorrow's SWT slide too: PARSIMONY (which is a Try-GOT, not an EGOT, for those of you who are using our Vocabulary Lessons).  It's a Try-GOT that my kids always enjoy inventing a word that should serve as the word's missing verb form.  Once they've invented a verb form, I challenge them to use it five times before the day is over with their other teachers.  That said, this might be a good week to maybe go back through your students' collected/graded vocabulary and see if they can find any other words that are Try-GOTs, then see if they can invent a brand new word (in the spirit of Frindle, am I right?) to fill in as the word's missing form.  
My kids love to write stories/comic strips wherein they use a good word they've created.  If they come up with PARSIMONIZE (or something like that tomorrow), I can get them writing all about that brand new word!  We'll write comics, we'll write raps, we'll make propaganda, and we will give life to a word that never before existed.
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Finally, if you're looking for an enjoyable persuasive/argumentative lesson that can be done quickly in the two or three days before Thanksgiving, WritingFix still features the original "Thanksgiving Turkey Protests" assignment, which you can easily teach even if you don't have the cited mentor text (My Lucky Day by Keiko Kasza) to share with your kids; you can just share the basic premise of the story: a fox plans to eat a smart pig for dinner, but the fox ends up exhausted because the pig keeps assigning him chores that--if done well--will ensure the fox an even tastier pig for dinner; the pigs ends up warm and clean, and the fox is too tired to eat.  A great, original story can come from the simple idea formula here: SMART TURKEY + NOT-AS-SMART FARMER or CHEF = funny story about the holiday meal saving himself/herself using good rhetorical strategies.
At one point, when WritingFix was still being sponsored by the NNWP, we had the vision of eventually posting several holiday-inspired writing lessons for every holiday in the school year, and my friend/colleague Barbara Surritte-Barker created this fun Thanksgiving lesson to serve as a a model.  The project never came to fruition unfortunately, but here is the direct link to the lesson, which comes with a graphic organizer, revision tools, and student samples from writers as young as second grade--even though the lesson's author was a middle school teacher:  http://writingfix.com/genres/persuasive_lessons/Thanksgiving_Protests.htm
And wow...that reminds me...last year we did something fun in our enrichment period with the Aristotle's Rhe-turk-ical Triangle, which I happily posted as a five-step lesson on my Pinterest Board: http://www.pinterest.com/pin/450852612668078674/  Follow the links that are provided below each picture in the write-up, and you'll see the whole lesson idea unfold in five steps.  I got funny, smart stuff from my kids last year doing this!
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Have a superb holiday with friends and family this upcoming week, if you indeed celebrate this week's holiday!  December's Lesson of the Month is going to demonstrate some new ways to have students create original iPod Playlists in pretty inventive ways -- to teach character analysis AND to teach grammar.  Fun stuff is coming on December 1!  Until then, have fun with unique talents, the word PARSIMONY, and persuasive turkeys!  
Dena and I wish you the best for you and your family!
--Corbett (& Dena) Harrison
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Saturday, November 29, 2014

Here is a post from the Harrisons. You will enjoy the idea. The writing exercise has the potential for setting a positive tone in the classroom. Enjoy.

As tomorrow's Sacred Writing Time slide will reveal, November 24 is "Celebrate Your Unique Talent" Day.  Here are my three most unique talents that I will share tomorrow to--hopefully--inspire my students to write about one of their own  unique talents:  1) I can accurately diagram any complete sentence written by William Shakespeare; oh, and speaking of grammar, I know exactly when to use "further" and when to use "farther."  2) I can identify every bird that might land in my backyard by not only sight but also by the different sounds they emit from the trees, bushes, and roof (I live in Nevada, remember, so there are no more than 20 different birds that regularly visit my backyard, but still...); 3) I can make myself wake up if I am having a dream that is too boring or repetitive by telling myself, while in my dream, "This is a boring story, Corbett. Wake up so we can start over again and have a better dream with the next go around."  It works every time.
Dena has many unique talents too; for example, she can 1) make our dogs purr like cats and 2) she can identify any popular song from the 80's and 90's within five seconds of hearing a song's first note.  She is unique with talents!  My students like to write about their unique talents or the unique talents of their friends or family; they also like to create fictional characters with unique talents they wish they had.  I think you could get a plethora of good SWT from tomorrow's SWT slide, so here it is for you to use: http://corbettharrison.com/documents/SWT/Free-Monthly-Slide-November24.pdf  Think about a unique talent you might share with your students to get them writing!
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Friday, November 21, 2014

Here are some great articles on deep thingking and writing. Enjoy!!! Courtesy of Choice Literacy.



The Big Fresh Newsletter from Choice Literacy
November 15, 2014 - Issue #408


Thinking Is Good for the Soul 
 
Readers are plentiful; thinkers are rare.
                                             Harriet Martineau
 
It was early in September, and Julie was leading her third graders in a discussion of a read aloud. She began, "Now, let's think about this character. . ."  A boy piped up immediately, "I don't like thinking!" Julie's eyes widened and she responded instantly, "But thinking is good for the soul!"  
I'd been observing the class for almost an hour. There was no question it was a rambunctious group, but there was more to the tension I felt than excess energy. Julie was pushing and students were resisting, and in that moment I knew what the resistance was about.
Julie expects her students to think deeply about the books they are reading and the texts they are writing, and share that thinking with classmates. In conferences and minilessons, Julie would ask thoughtful open-ended questions, and the students would give superficial answers, throwing them back at her as quickly as possible. The need in that classroom wasn't for learning -- it was for unlearning. The kids wanted to "do school" - to rush through tasks and figure out how to please Julie with their responses. They couldn't see yet that Julie's pleasure would come from seeing them immersed in thinking hard and loving reflection.
When a student says, "I hate to think," I wonder if it is equivalent to "I hate to write," because they are viewing thinking as punishment. How many times have they heard, "You go sit in that chair over there and think about it"?  When my daughter was in the primary grades and children misbehaved in her school, they were sent to the "Reflection Room" to contemplate the error of their ways. My husband and I laughed and said it sounded a lot better than detention, but do we want kids associating reflection with bad behavior? Or maybe some students view thinking as a losing game of trying to guess what's in the teacher's head, so the more quickly they throw out an answer, the more time they will have to come up with another answer. It's a version of beat the clock being played out day after day in some classrooms, and you win by being done with the task.
Anyone who has experienced the joy of deep thinking and being immersed in a literacy activity (whether it's reading a book, writing a narrative, or listening to a story) would argue that it's good for the soul. Deep thinking provokes a happy tired feeling, like an energizing workout at the gym where you've pushed yourself, only you've built some new neuron paths instead of muscles. Julie and I chatted later about how she has her work cut out for her in helping students recognize this joy and where it can come from. But it's also the most essential work that needs to be done in schools.
 
This week we look at favorite characters in children's books, and how to use them in instruction. Plus more as always -- enjoy!
 
Brenda Power
Founder, Choice Literacy

 

 
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Here are two features from the archives on instruction with beloved characters from children's literature.
 
Franki Sibberson shares her Characters We Love booklist:
 
 
 
Ann Williams finds a creative way for students to empathize with characters in Yoga and Character Traits:
 
 
 
Ruth Shagoury and Meghan Rose at the LitforKids blog have posted a fun book flight on a favorite character type from children's literature, Rapunzel and Other Maidens in Towers:
 
 
 
The online course Designing Primary Writing Units with the Common Core in Mind instructed by Katie DiCesare runs December 3-14. The course includes three on-demand webinars, a DVD, print resources, and personal response from Katie. Click on the link below for more details:
 
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Friday, November 14, 2014

Having a real audience for your writing has always boosted students performance. Here is an article that looks at other benefits of a real audience. Courtesy of ASCD SmartBrief.

Online collaboration connects 2 AP English classes
Two Advanced Placement English teachers in classrooms 900 miles apart -- one in Arkansas, the other in South Carolina -- are reporting "phenomenal" results from a program in which teachers and students collaborated in one online classroom. The teachers write in this commentary that they saw improvements in students' writing and critical-thinking skills. eSchool News (free registration) (10/29)Bookmark and Share

Friday, November 7, 2014

Here the Harrison's November writing lesson. It is great as always. Courtesy of Corbett Harrison. Enjoy!

We had a bout of the flu we had to fight-off in this house, so I'm a few days behind on posting the lesson of the month.  It's up and ready to be looked over: http://corbettharrison.com/LotM.htm#month  I suspect there are a few typos in the lesson still, but I need to get it posted and double-check for those minor mistakes after a good night's sleep with some Nyquil.
Please note this month's lesson--inspired by the excellent student-made metaphors about writer's notebooks that I asked for in September--have inspired a new writing challenge; this time, the challenge is for teachers to do the writing after being inspired by something their students write.  I hope you'll read about it and consider entering.  Here is the link to information about this teacher/student writing challenge, though you may have to read over the entire lesson of the month in order to make complete sense of it: http://corbettharrison.com/free_lessons/Four-Metaphor-Poems.htm#poetry
I wrote this month's lesson while a little peeved at a few teachers I'm dealing with who removed the citations from some of my freely posted handouts and re-posted them at their district website, and in doing so, removed anyone's ability to know who it was that actually created the materials they are giving away to others.  I passionately address all educators' responsibilities in citing materials posted electronically at their own websites in my lesson-of-the-month's introduction, and to all of you who do properly cite materials borrowed and re-posted on the Internet, I hope you'll enjoy the "voice" of this month's lesson; for those of you who remove page citations or post things at your own websites that you probably don't have the right to, I hope you won't miss that I'm kind of making fun of you.  We're in an electronic age of lesson and material sharing, my fellow teachers; let's respect one another's intellectual property, always giving credit to those who share things they create or someday they may stop posting things freely altogether.
Thanks, and have a great month of teaching.
--Corbett & Dena Harrison (http://corbettharrison.com)
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Sunday, November 2, 2014

An upcoming lesson by the Harrisons on metaphors. Enjoy.

So...I've been putting in 3-4 hours every weekend since August into the "Lesson of the Month" for November.  I think I'm really trying to outdo myself for some reason.  My teacher model is finally done, and I think it's worthy of sharing ahead of time.  Especially if you've been using writer's notebooks this year.
The lesson I'm publishing at the Ning on November 1st, well, it's one that focuses on metaphors which is one of my favorite topics and tools for learning and teaching.  I'm really trying to create a demonstration lesson that is both fun for my kids and that would simultaneously blow the minds of the "Common Core Police," should they happen by my classroom with their clipboards and observation forms.  
Today, I am sharing this new lesson's Teacher Model ahead of time by posting it at the Ning.  Here is a link where you can open the poem and help me celebrate the four student writers who officially inspired it:  http://writinglesson.ning.com/profiles/blogs/my-teacher-model-a-four-metaphor-poem  
I think I'm excited mostly about how it was written; it went through a cool process.  Four student writers from four other teachers' classrooms sent me four metaphors about their four writer's notebooks, and I used their "seed ideas" to create a "Four Metaphor Poem" that--I think--every kid who is keeping a writer's notebook should read because it contains good advice that even the great Ralph Fletcher would respect, I think.
Maybe you'll agree.  Maybe not.  Either way,  I better go feed my dogs.  Enjoy the rest of your weekend and have a great Halloween.
--Corbett Harrison
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